Did you know that Russia is taking drugs so that they can be better and win a medal?
I think that they should not be taking them because it means there cheating.
Firstly I don’t want Russia to take the drugs because that is bad to make yourself better when no one else is.
Secondly it is CHEATING so it is wrong for them to be doing that. Lastly I think that they will be better and win a gold medal when they shouldnt’ at all. It was that bad that there not allowed to come back. If there allowed to come to the olympics again I hope they won’t do it again.
In conclusion we should not cheat.
Well done Tahlia, you have got some good points in your persuasive argument.
ReplyDeleteNext step is to put your points into paragraphs
Well done Tahlia, you have got some good points in your persuasive argument.
ReplyDeleteNext step is to put your points into paragraphs
You have covered some good points here Tahlia, great work. A very relevant topic at the moment too!
ReplyDeleteDo you think stopping them from competing will help them learn not to take drugs?
You could try to add an extra sentence with some more detail for each point you made.