Sunday 25 November 2018

compound sentence work


Try to write 3 compound sentences on your own using the connectives in the box above to connect two complete thoughts.


  1. In the summer I like to go to the beach and swim.

2. I like to sing but i’m not that good.

3. I bake cakes when it’s somebody’s birthday.

To make the compound sentence you have to make your own sentence than I used one of the words from the box and added it to my sentence.

Thursday 22 November 2018

exploding a moment





With the shining on us exitement excitement filled our bodies as We lined up ready to rēhi .

 Swarleen,Cairo, and I got on a iata and got in the line with all the other yachts. Go miss Bartlett yelled from the sandy shore.  Everyone pushed and shoved and crashed into each other. Smash! someone crashed into our boat.

People were splashing kātao everywhere and we were getting soaked.  There was a big pile of iata and we were part of it.

We tried our best to escape but we had no luck and started going backwards but then we got pushed out by all the boats. We were of to the moutere.

Paddling as hard and as in time as we could we passed another boat.  As we got closer and closer to the island there were three boats already there and we had to come fourth.

 We were going really fast now. 4th place Aj called as we reached the rocky island.