view from the cockpit

    VIEW FROM THE COCKPIT

THE RED WORDS ARE MY REVISING

As thousands of people rush into the plane like a tsunami destroying the city the pilot gets ready for the magnificent journey ahead of him.  

 As he looks ahead out on the horizon the golden sunset peirced pierced his leaf green eyes.  The fluffy white clouds camouflage with his shirt with silver buttons.  His glasses shining in the sunlight.

 He loved sitting in the cockpit with the  With a cup of warm coffee by his side,  looking at the millions of buttons able to do different things.  The buttons look like a bright rainbow in the windy sky.

the giant

One gloomy Saturday, the sky was stormy and grey.  A boy called Luke wore tored jeans, a grey shirt and a paraone as chocolate jersey.  Luke thought today was going to be an ordinary day, but as the day went on it became unordinary.  

It all started when  iwa year old Luke was laying in his bed drifting to sleep then CLINK! He heard something coming from the basement.  

He stumbled out of bed wondering to himself what made that sound.  STOMP! He was so close to the basement and he was a bit scared.  He hikoi into the basement and examined it.  Staring up at him was his ngeru holding something in his mouth.  Luke carefully lifted it out of her mouth.  It was like a tiny glass bottle filled with neon kakariki liquid.  He thought to himself if he should drink it then a few minutes after that he decide to drink it.

A few minutes lter he felt funny and then he started to grow.  He grew and grew until he was as big as the whare than it stopped.

The next day it was sunny and warm so he decided to for a hikoi to the floral park.  He tried but it was really hard because his village had tiny little house so he had to be careful to not step on them.  But of course there were advantages to being giant like oma and pekepeke really fast,

When he got back from the park he stepped into the basement and examined it again.  He was looking for another glass bottle to make him be normal sized.  “OW” something dropped on his panepane, it was a tiny glass bottle like the one before but it had a light mawhero liquid inside.  He drank it and it made him normal sized.

my writing goals

My writing goals are to use paragraphs in my writing and to use speech dialogue

Leaving for war

Leaving for war

Ra light creeped round the corner, I raced to the atua whiowhio station with my pāpā because he was going to the war.

 I woke up had pancakes for breakfast, I had a shower, brushed my teeth and got changed into my kikorangi shirt  and leggings and rushed to the atua whiowhio station with my māmā .

 When we got there we saw boxes of flowers heaps of people and lots of trains.  We saw pāpā parking and racing to us.

A few minutes later a pingau train  parked in front of us and we had to say goodbye to pāpā.  I don't really think he's ready for the war the gruesome blood, monehu soldiers but he went anyway.

 Just as he was about to leave my māmā carried me up to the wet window so i could hug him before he left.

Just as the Kakariki, pango and grey number 39 plane was about to take off, a little red topped hine named Emma and her waiti dog Angel skipped on to the manurere happily.  As the number 39 manurere took off they held onto their pango , leather seats.  They started their flight to Fiji.  Finally they leveled off and the manurere calmed down.  They looked out the wini and all Emma and Angel saw was a beautiful pingao sunrise on the tahatu .  When they were on top of the moana, they heard an unfamiliar noise. Emma caushisley  tiptoed to the main window and looked straight ahead.  Alarmed at what she saw, she couldn't help but scream “there’s a awhiowhio ”.  Emma tried to steer the manurere around but the controls broke off.  Emma was kaikanohi around for something that could help them.  Finally she saw two parashoots ,  So Emma put one on and also then put one on Angel.  They ran to the nearest door and jumped out just in time.  As they floated down they looked around and made shapes with the cotton candy like clouds.  As they touched the ground with there feet and paws they walked back to there house and went to bed.  

anzac a-z

ANZAC A to Z

A = Ammunition that blasted into the air.	B = battles Never ending	C = camoflaugeing soldiers in the trenches	D =  dangerous weapons being used	E = explosives exploding dirt mud and anything in its path
F = ferocious soldiers fighting in the war	G = grenades being thrown in the dusty air	H = hazards are everywhere waiting for soldiers to come to them	I = international Countries fighting in the war	J = jets flying out of sight
K = killing soldiers one by one	L = land mines lying under the ground patiently waiting for a soldier to step on it	M = machine guns getting shot in to the air every second	N = nurses rushing every direction to help injured soldiers	O = outbreak of world war 1
P = poppys growing in the bloody fields	Q = quiet soldiers sitting in the trenches waiting to shoot	R = rescueing soldiers is the nurses job to make them not injured	S = sacrifice is something that soldiers in war do	T = terror is what the soldiers and their familys feel
U = uniforms are worn by the soldiers at war	V = violent soldiers shooting the soldiers on the other side	W = weapons being used in every direction	X = NONE	Y = yelling soldiers yelling in pain
Z = zones in every direction